I have been working on this song for the last couple of months and I finished it last night. I posted the lyrics below and I would love some feedback on it.Update People have weighed in and made some great suggestions!- Try the song in a higher key, maybe a 1/2 or full step- Find a better title that better fits- Find some different/better chords for the pre-bridge in each verse- I am thinking about reworking the last verse and specifically, the last line- ...

I am taking a break this afternoon from a workshop to make this post and digest a few of the things that have been crammed in my brain and heart the last two days.Yesterday worship was led by Paul Baloche and Bob Kauflin. We were taught by both Bob Kauflin and Charlie Peacock. We had various breakout sessions on songwriting by the likes ...